Comic 211 - Exclusivity Clods

8th Oct 2012, 9:15 AM
Exclusivity Clods
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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dpallee 8th Oct 2012, 9:21 AM edit delete reply
cute series...I like it.
Muffaroo 8th Oct 2012, 9:31 AM edit delete reply
This works pretty well as a comic strip, with flow and readability and expression. The silhouettes are well placed. Obviously, I'm setting you up for something harsh, so here it is: poses are deadpan. Michelle seems more like a limited action figure, especially in the first panel. She's in a position that would be sustainable if she wasn't moving at all, and it looks sort of like that's what's happening: not moving.

Feel free to delete this after reading it. It would be more suited to an email than a public message, but it's been on my mind for a while, and I thought it was better to at least say it once than not to. (Insert sappy uplifting thought about improving blah blah blah.) The poses are okay for the talking panels, just not for action.
Muffaroo 9th Oct 2012, 7:54 AM edit delete reply
(Not sure about the settings, but it looks like it's offering me the choice of deleting somebody else's comment. That can't be good. I'm chicken to try it, but maybe it would stop me if I did.)
mark stacy 9th Oct 2012, 12:01 PM edit delete reply
I've checked once, just out of curiosity, with the edit button, and it tells you you can't edit because the comment is "not yours" (there's a way for comic creators here to be able to delete comments besides our own, but I haven't had the need to do that, especially with constructive criticism, no matter how defensive I may get off the internet). I assume it's the same with delete. You could delete your own, I'd think, if you wished, but I don't want to do that here for the reasons I just mentioned about constructive criticism. I don't want to be like Brooke McEldowney!
Muffaroo 10th Oct 2012, 8:05 AM edit delete reply
It says I have to be logged in. Interesting.